The subway lost power at exactly 11:43 PM.
One second the train was moving.
The next, everything went black.
People started murmuring, checking phones, joking nervously.

Then the emergency lights turned on.
Dim red.
That’s when we realized we were stopped in the middle of a tunnel.
No driver announcements.
No movement.
Nothing.
A little boy across from me suddenly grabbed his mother’s arm and whispered:
“Why is that man outside?”
Everyone laughed at first.
Until we heard it.
Knock.
Knock.
Knock.
Coming from the outside of the train.
Heads slowly turned toward the window.
And there, standing motionless in the tunnel darkness beside our car…
was a man smiling directly at us.
The problem was…
there shouldn’t have been anyone in the tunnel.
Then the lights flickered again.
And he was suddenly closer.
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People started panicking immediately.
One man tried forcing the emergency doors open while others screamed for the conductor.
But the smiling man outside never moved.
He just stood beside the window staring in.
Then the train speakers suddenly crackled to life.
Static.
Heavy breathing.
And a terrified voice whispered:
“Do NOT let him inside the train.”
The lights flickered again.
This time the man was standing at the next window.
Closer to our door.
Still smiling.
That’s when the little boy started crying.
Because the man outside was copying us.
Every movement.
Exactly.
When a woman covered her mouth in fear…
the man copied her.
When someone backed away…
he backed away too.
Then all the lights shut off completely.
For three seconds, the tunnel went silent.
When the emergency lights came back on…
the man outside was gone.
But the seat beside me was no longer empty.
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